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Breath of Freedom Poetry's avatar

Love this! Beautifully done.

"with a swoop and a dart

out flew his wish

(it dived like a fish

but it climbed like a dream)

throbbing like a heart

singing like a flame"

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The Sea in Me    (Síodhna)'s avatar

Love the shapes you image Edgar and the ravenous hunger for isolation. I have felt that.

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Edgar Ballantyne's avatar

Of course, no actual drowning occurred in the making etc etc ..

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Edgar Ballantyne's avatar

Thanks for sending it around again @Paul Wittenberger

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