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Melanie Bettinelli's avatar

The wordplay in the first stanza feels very Dylan Thomas: exuberant and full of the joy of language.

Ann Collins's avatar

Your poem is felt in all the water molecules of this human body, where it diffuses out like steam into all the empty space between those molecules. I would not change one word, Edgar.

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