Twenty Six
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For a Christmas treat, and because as far I can tell you’ve been good, you can have a more recent draft, which I hope you enjoy. It doesn’t have a title just yet, or it won’t, or it’s finished, or I don’t know what to do with it. I’m sure you know what I mean.
I: Send it express priest and send it ringing sermonly Through all our late joysand summer and is it time for psychotherapy no time like the past and creep through stands of mustwould and no time like the past In this condensing atmosphere and water falling happily ever laughter II: There is only so much water earthly held For crying lakes in the hands of the valley Stern glaciers Playing unaffected For clouds building up And clattering the concrete There is only so much water for all III: I sent these over the ocean In a burning paper Slow writhing boat to you Knowing the tide will dance it through IV: Take me slow and gorgeous in your saline crystalline Sing me from your glory This hypertonic paradise Suffuses in so easily I take this moment with For we are the water
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For those who are interested print and eBook copies of my first collection are now available under the title ‘51 Poems’. Print at Booktopia and Amazon, or eBook on Apple Books. There are eBook versions on the Booktopia and Amazon pages as well, whichever may suit you. You can also read the complete (and favourable) review of this book on independent book review!
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The wordplay in the first stanza feels very Dylan Thomas: exuberant and full of the joy of language.
Your poem is felt in all the water molecules of this human body, where it diffuses out like steam into all the empty space between those molecules. I would not change one word, Edgar.